Horror Pitch Feedback

Jamie
Title: Working Title

Good Ideas:
-Black men (unidentifiable features)
-Opening, girl in white room is good
-Ends on a climax

Problems:
-However I don't understand how the opening sequence links to the rest of the film
-More detail about the characters

Commission:
-Probably, but some parts of film need to be developed and work out how to film them


Alex
Title: Working Title

Good Ideas:
-Black book
-Unique
-Realism

Problems:
-Storyline needs developing
-Need to adapt the ending
-Need more background to characters

Commission:
-Maybe, will need to develop the plot